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In my dreams you ask me things by ~wretchedteddy:iconwretchedteddy:



You asked and I said,
You’ve broken me like you'd broken bread.
‘Cause I am the chains that keep the monsters under your bed.
Living on the third story you’ve sent,
as cars roll away under my head.

Breathing down my neck will make you a cold-lipped killer baby.
Just staring you in the eyes, down past the black and blue, I know,
I know, I know you will be hitting my face.
It won’t clean out your mouth baby
so you just savor the taste.

The bottle cast up arcs through the air, hot and black with no starlight.
Glinting then gliding, flying over streetlights,
one, two, and twinkle, twinkle, shake, shake.
Tar, soft veins through the body of asphalt break
And drag me under.

Worthy, deserving,
not naturally, not normally, not me.
But if I can lift off your shadows
under morning stars,
cars would roll like gulls like me, out to the sea.
©2008-2009 ~wretchedteddy
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this is about stuff

Update: This is going to be published in Calliope Nerve [link] , an American Publication, not sure where exactly.
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i'm no good critic but i tell you, this gave me blurry chills of passion :heart:

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i write. this is what i want.
and sometimes i write lyrics for boy bands.
yay! im glad you like, thanks for the favourite!

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I know how the devil sleeps at night
He lights the fire behind my eyes
And he lets it there and I let it lie
I know how the devil sleeps at night
This one hits heavy. The first two lines are nothing short of magic. I love the seedy vibe.

One question though: a cold-lipped killer baby? or
a cold-lipped killer, baby?

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The Ever-Lovin' Blue-Eyed Virginia.
unfortunately the author of this poem is lost to antiquity so we may never know. that is to say i wrote it a while ago and don't really remember my intent, but i like it both ways at once. in fact whenever you come across this in my work, just apply both simultaneously. more is ALWAYS better.

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I know how the devil sleeps at night
He lights the fire behind my eyes
And he lets it there and I let it lie
I know how the devil sleeps at night

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